I discovered that if you keep a journal you can you can Keep a lot of stuff .you can write down memories of you children and that you can let out our emotions. I also discovered that you can release stress out if you write because when your writing you are consternating on what you are write so you for get the thing that was making you stressed out. I also discovered that you can scream in it and text in it and no one can hear you or know what your writing about. A journal is also a Judgment Free Zone because you can write whatever you want and no one will judge you on what you are writing. I discovered that a journal could be a dream catcher

9/8/14

When I get homework in class I always wait to the last minute to do it. I shouldn’t wait to the last minute to do my homework because then I have a lot of homework to do at ounce. It its very stressful for me to finish all my homework at once because I have so much to do that I don’t want to do it anymore but I know I have to do it. It is better to get it out of the way when I get homework that same day but I don’t because I’m to lazy to do my homework that same day I get it. I have learn from the past that not to do your homework last minute because then I am up all late doing my homework

9/10/14

This weekend is going to be fun. I am going to Disneyland on Friday. I go to Disneyland once or twice a week because I have the annual pass and I like going to Disneyland then on Saturday I’m going to my sister birthday party. Then on Sunday I am going to an angels baseball game. I am hoping to get my baseball sign by one of the players. Then I am going to do some homework that I have to do for some of my classes

9/17/14
This is my first semester at MT Sac I like the school it is a nice school I thought that college was going to be harder than I thought It was going to be but its actually not that hard at all that hard part is that I get a lot of homework to do but other than that college is pretty easy as of now this the best part of the day when I get to go home cuz I am really tired from the day at school I just want to got home and sleep but I cant because I have other work to do form my other classes.

9/24/14
For the weekend I am going to go tot Los Vegas I’ve never been there before so I think its going tot be lots of fun I’m going with my friends. I’ve never gambled before so I think it would be fun for the first time to go and gamble. The things that I love the most about gambling is that you win money but tat the same time you loose money I want to have a great time there

10/1/14

Well last week while I was getting ready for school I saw my dad laying in the hall way and they told me he felt like if he was going to faint. Then all of a sudden my dad had a segue I didn’t know what to do so I started yelling dad so many times but nothing happen I was sacred and I didn’t know what to do because I’ve never experience someone having one so I started to yell his name so many time and nothing happen so then I started to slap him in the face and they he finally told me he was fine I was so scared for him I thought something bad was going to happen to him but he said he was fine.

10/06/14

Today I didn’t felt like going to work or school but I had to because I need the money so I went t work I didn’t want to come to school because I’m so tried I had to wake up early to go to work today and plus I had to come to school today because I had a test in my math class cant wait till I go home I am so tried I’m just gonna go lay down and go to sleep when I get home. The game I went to was so much fun but they lost but its all good there still the best

10/8/14
Today I woke up in a good mood I actually wanted to go tot school and work I wanted to go tot work because I got paid today that’s why I wanted to go to work. Today I just wanted to come to school I don’t know why but I did wanted to come to school.

10/13/14

Today I am just tired and sleepy I had to wake up at 5 in the morning to get ready for work after work I had to come to school nut I didn’t feel like coming but I had to come I just want to go home and sleep.

10/15/14

Today I had to wake up at 3:30 I didn’t want to but I had to because I had to go to work and on top of that I had to come to school I didn’t want to come but I did anyways I’m so tired but this is my last class for the day and I could go home now and go to sleep.

10/22/14

I can’t wait for Friday because I am having a Halloween party at my house. It’s going to be lots of fun I never have had a Halloween party or gone to one. That’s why I want to make it the coolest Halloween party. I hope a lot of people that I invited come to my party.

10/27/14

I had a great weekend this weekend was fun because I had a Halloween party there was a lot of people at my party I also had fun because I went to universal studios Halloween horror night it was my first time going it was fun and scary at the same time

11/03/14

I had as grate weekend I went to the club on Thursday I also went to a Halloween party but I didn’t go out trick or treating because I think I’m to old to be doing that and its not the same anymore i don’t see a lot of kids trick or treating like I use to when I was younger I see less and less people each year.

Spooky story cover sheet

I saw a boy closing he eyes trying to push the red button. I realized I had my topic when I pictured it in my mind that when I

knew I had my topic. I compose it in my head but it was hard so then I just started to write the whole thing out. I got stuck

several times I had to think very hard to get what I want it to put in my story.it was finished when I had covered everything. I

will try to add more to my story because it is very short I like long stories and it is very boring that’s why I would add to it next

time. The spooky story was not meaningful to me because it has no meaning to me. I will be able to understand my meaning

because I like the way my story came out. I like about my story is that the boy tries to push the button and nothing happens. If I

would to keep writing my story it would get way much better than it is and it would be longer and more interesting of I took

more time on it.

Once upon a time cover sheet

What I says in my mind before I started to write I saw a dog in my mind. I just started to write the whole thing and then people

started to add to it and I just read it and liked it so I left it that way. Well I wanted it to have a happy ending so I made it a happy

ending and that’s when I realized that I wanted to end it. I realized the piece was finished when I had the ending I wanted. I told

me it was finish because I wanted it to have a happy ending and it did. I would try and fix it and make it better. The writing is not

meaningful to me it has no meaning to me. I think it was well organized that the reader can understand my ideas. It makes me

think that because it is clear. I like about my story is that it has a sad begging then it has a happy ending at the end. If I would

to continued to keep working on this piece it would be really good and have more to it and it would be better than it is already.

Where I’m from cover sheet

Th things I saw in my mind before I started it to write about my topic was I saw my house and the lemon tree I have in my backyard. The thing I did first was I just started to write the whole thing out. Well I wrote the whole thing first then as I was reading it if I didn’t like the way it sounded I change things to make it sound better. I realized I wanted to end the piece when I had done everything I had to do. Next time I would try to add more to my poem and make it better. Yes this writing is meaningful to me because it tells you where I’m am from. The writing does show my thinking of the topic. The thing that I like about this piece of writing is that it is a poem and it tells you where I’m from. My thinking and my writing change while working on this piece was I never knew I could write a poem but I did. If I continued to work on this poem I think I would add more details to it and it would get so much more better and more interesting.

The first thing I did is I did a map of all the thing he did that day and what happen to him that day and what he do after the bad

thing happen to him. After the first line I started to write quick because I had everything I wanted to write mapped out well the

step I took to compose this piece is I took my time and I have everything mapped out so it wasn’t had for me I realized what the

piece was about when I got to the main point of the story. I realized the piece was finish was when I had covered everything I

wanted to write about in my paper. Next time I would try to add more to the story. The writing is not meaningful to me because

the writing is not about me. I think it is well organized because I took my time to write it and I had everything I wanted to write

mapped out first. I think it is really nice because it talk about someone other person thing that he did that he will never forget.

The questions I have is if I covered the topic and if my paper is good.

One day Tyler went on a three-day weekend desert trip. He went with a group of friends. Him and his friends went on a trial ride on the way back from the ride he tried taking out the dong buggy he come of a dry riverbed. There was a bush he did not see so the back tire hit the bush. He went flying over the handlebars and he landed head first into the ground. The helmet that he had on hit his shoulder really hard and broke his collarbone. His friend’s dad came out to help him and also other people that saw him crash also came to help him. They told him if he as okay and offered him a ride back to camp. His three day trip ended early he had to go back home on the first day that he was there. He had to drive in a motor home back home for two hours said it was the worst ride he ever had because he was in pain. He had to go to the hospital he was sitting at the hospital for three house just so he could see a doctor. He had to be in an arm sling for one month. He said that was the worst camping trip he ever had. Now he is looking for something safer to drive because he dose not want to drive he has anymore. next time he goes to the desert he will be much more careful and look always.

Journal cover sheet

I didn’t see anything in my mind before I started to write my journals I just started to write. Well I free write it because it is a

journal and that’s what you do so I put whatever was on my mind to my journal. I ended the piece when I hand nothing more

to tell or to write about in my writing. I figure out when I wanted to end my piece because I didn’t know what to write about

anymore and I thought it was done and didn’t need any more detail.  Next time for my journal I would try to add more because

my journals are too short and I would keep on writing. Some of my journal writing was meaningful to me. I like about this piece

of writing is that it is a journal and you could pretty much write whatever is on your mind. The question I have is that if my

journal writing is nice. If I would to wire more my journal would have a lot more writing in it.

There are five people sitting in one big green chair. One of the persons has a remote for a TV. The people are so interested on whatever they are watching but the person in the middle is not that’s why he has the remote to change the channel because whatever they are watching it is boring to him. He wants to find something else to watch but I think they don’t want to make the other people mad so I think he’s going to leave it so they wont get mad at him.

Fire drill

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Pinkie, circus, thunder

A boy went to the circus while he was walking up the stairs to get to his seat he feel and hurt his pinkie and then all of a sudden it started to thunder storm.

There once was a boy he love to go the circus. The boy had been going ever since he was a littlie. The boy wanted to a clown preform in a circus because the little boy loved clowns and circus. One day the boy saw a post in the ad that there was a circus coming to town. The boy asked his mom and dad if they could take them to the circus and they said yes. The mom and dad took him to the circus. when the little boy got to the circus he was walking up the stairs to get to his seat he fell and hurt his pinkie. then all of a sudden it started to thunder storm. So they left the circus because the boy couldn’t move his pinkie and it was cold and raining. Then they took the boy to the doctor so they could check on his finger to see if it was ok. The doctor told the little boy how he had hurt his finger the boy told him that he was at a circus and he feel and hurt his finger.  The doctor told the boy that his finger would be ok it was just bruised. Time went by and the boy got older and his dream came true of becoming a clown and preforming in a big circus.

Well I saw albert Ernestine talking to a chicken in my mind I realized I had my topic when I had the picture on my mind. After

my first line I didn’t know what to write anymore I just stoked there looking at the screen. The steps where I had to think hard

to come up with my story. I realize what the piece was really about when the chicken told Albert Einstein that he wanted to be

just like him.  Next time I would try to write more or add more to my story. The writing is not meaning full tom I just had a topic

I had to choose and write about it so I did but he writing does not have meaning to me. I think that the grammar and spelling is

clear enough so that the reader can understand the meaning to my story I think so because I used simple grammar and my

spelling is correct.  I like about my writing is that the chicken met someone famous and wants to be just like him. The question

I have about my writing is if my writing is any good. If I had continued to work on this piece it world have been a lot longer and

much more better an interesting than it is now.